When I first wrote them, I intended them to be just one poem, but then I realized that the stanzas didn't quite link to one another, so I left them like this.
I have to admit that the first one reminds me of haiku, even though it's longer and it doesn't respect the 5-7-5 rule.
Besides, I found that it's a good way to learn new words in english like kaleidoscopic, teemed, gargled and hagiography. That was the main purpose of these stanzas.
I started my writing 'career' with poems in my native language. Now I'm more of a prose type of person, but once every blue moon my poetic vein resurfaces and I get these XD
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Date: 2015-12-02 01:35 pm (UTC)When I first wrote them, I intended them to be just one poem, but then I realized that the stanzas didn't quite link to one another, so I left them like this.
I have to admit that the first one reminds me of haiku, even though it's longer and it doesn't respect the 5-7-5 rule.
Besides, I found that it's a good way to learn new words in english like kaleidoscopic, teemed, gargled and hagiography. That was the main purpose of these stanzas.
I started my writing 'career' with poems in my native language. Now I'm more of a prose type of person, but once every blue moon my poetic vein resurfaces and I get these XD